Thursday, 12 March 2015

my writing the title is Via's birthday party

this is the first part of writing

I was in the car on the way to mini golf for Via's  birthday party and all of her friends are coming. I have never met them before. Just then Dad cranked up the radio.                                                                                                                                          " stay in allllllllllliiiiiiiiivvvvvvvveeeeeee"Dad sang.

Just then a lot of cars were honking at Dad. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnkkkkkkkkk!. Dad finally noticed that the cars were honking. Dad yelled out of the window" SORRY I WILL GO NOW".We finally made it to mini golf, via and I ran inside, mum and dad walks behind us. We waited  for half an hour for Via's friends to arrive, when they arrived  we got are clubs and balls and  began playing, Vias club was pink, mine was hot red, Vias friends were blue and the balls were white.

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