Wednesday, 6 May 2015

my poem


                                                  i can't believe summer here
                                                  and i love eating pears
                                         SPLASH i hear people diving in the pool
                                    and when i saw that ice cream i started to droll
                                           OUCH the sand was as hot as a sun
                                            but playing at the beach is really fun

                        i think i am at mutistracil, the language futures i used were onomatopoeia, rhyming and  metaphors

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